Wow laken that is such a cool poem and it's about dogs brilliant by the way my name is Ashlee I am a year six from Yaldhurst Model School. Who knew dogs were so fluffy and small.
Hello laken my name is Ashlee and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model school.
I love your cool poem do you know James Norcliffe because if you do he is my uncle the reason I tell you this is because he is a famous book and poem writer. this is so cool please tell me if there are more blog posts coming my way bye for now sincerely Ashlee from Yaldhurst Model school.
Wow laken that is such a cool poem and it's about dogs brilliant by the way my name is Ashlee I am a year six from Yaldhurst Model School. Who knew dogs were so fluffy and small.
ReplyDeleteHello laken my name is Ashlee and I am a year six at Yaldhurst Model school.
ReplyDeleteI love your cool poem do you know James Norcliffe because if you do he is my uncle the reason I tell you this is because he is a famous book and poem writer. this is so cool please tell me if there are more blog posts coming my way
bye for now
sincerely Ashlee from Yaldhurst Model school.
Kia ora Layken, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you showed us the poem you wrote because it looks amazing and I think its really cool because I like that its about dogs.
This reminded me of when I made a poem for my home learning. It was about warrior cats and it was an acrostic poem.
To improve, you could put more colours or fonts just to make it really stand out like it should.
Why did you blog about this?
Bye Layken, keep it up!
-Amelia 🦊