I loved reading through your story. I like the way that you have included things that have been talked about in Whanau Time about how to be a good friend. I was wondering if putting your story into a slideshow format would be better for reading it like a book and then you could include pictures - I think it could look really great!
Kia ora Layken I"m Alvin from yms I enjoyed the part when the biyce ran into a car You should keep out. Did you ever foget to wear a helmet? did you think about building a track just for bicecles - Alvin
Kia ora Layken,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading through your story. I like the way that you have included things that have been talked about in Whanau Time about how to be a good friend. I was wondering if putting your story into a slideshow format would be better for reading it like a book and then you could include pictures - I think it could look really great!
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Layken I"m Alvin from yms I enjoyed the part when the biyce ran into a car You should keep out. Did you ever foget to wear a helmet? did you think about building a track just for bicecles - Alvin
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