Hello, Layken. Good job on your writing! Your story was very interesting, though next time you should use capitals for Caleb, speech marks and commas. You used good skills on you maths problems, good job! Did it take a long time to think of your Show Not Tell story?
Hello, Laken! You have done a great job on your writing it is very interesting, I think you are feeing scared and nervous! Next time could you please make your background white or another colour because I can't really read it! Did you like writing your show not tell? Because I know I did! From Katelynn!
Hi Layken I like your maths follow up but some of your questions were wrong like 4X25 was wrong so maybe you could fix that.Maybe you could put your reading follow up on
Hello, Layken. Good job on your writing! Your story was very interesting, though next time you should use capitals for Caleb, speech marks and commas. You used good skills on you maths problems, good job! Did it take a long time to think of your Show Not Tell story?
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Hello, Laken!
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job on your writing it is very interesting, I think you are feeing scared and nervous!
Next time could you please make your background white or another colour because I can't really read it!
Did you like writing your show not tell? Because I know I did!
From Katelynn!
Hi Layken I like your maths follow up but some of your questions were wrong like 4X25 was wrong so maybe you could fix that.Maybe you could put your reading follow up on
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