Friday 9 September 2016

Reflection writing

Writing

For writing this week I've been learning how a household machine works. Here's the start of it. Go here to see the whole thing.


2 comments:

  1. Hello Layken it's Ry. Cool Layken your household machine is awesome but maybe you should put some more info into it, it's just that you don't have much information in your work so you should update it so more bloggers.
    Goodbye ( hope this was helpful )

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    1. What does you should update so more bloggers mean?

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